This week I thought your poem was really good but it was a little complicated to read the poem. Next time you should pick a different picture or a lighter text. :)
I think that this poem doesn't really capture the visual aspect. You don't describe any of the creatures, and I was pretty much left confused at the end. But, I do think that this poem is very original. You don't see many battles as poems.
This week I thought your poem was really good but it was a little complicated to read the poem. Next time you should pick a different picture or a lighter text. :)
ReplyDeleteI think that this poem doesn't really capture the visual aspect. You don't describe any of the creatures, and I was pretty much left confused at the end. But, I do think that this poem is very original. You don't see many battles as poems.
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